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Saturday 5 July, 2008
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SURPRISE…… part 2


We stopped in previous part
at their marriage and Anu’s aspiration about her husband….after that….



Adi is all set for his
lifetime experience, his first night…he is quite thrilled… basically he is
excited as there is lot of mysteries still he have about Anu. Even while having
sath phera and tying a mangal sutra..it was such a rush ,,that he could not
enjoy that special moment like looking at her eyes saying  I love
u
…bending forward near her face and his hand around her neck  for tying knot, looking at her anxious face
and slight smile ..and checking special knot is fixed well for lifetime…but Adi
now is surrounded by his friends…in Adi’s 
mind the one thing he is thinking is when clock would show 9 pm.

Anu is surrounded by
relatives of Adi, she is looking around walls everything which is new to
her…her eyes are getting used to place…she is finding alone in crowd, people
have come to meet her…she is trying to be good listener. In back of her mind,
she is thinking about her mother and father…what they would be doing now in home…
her mind says...Hmm mother wld be in kitchen …and father would be in clearing
all dues of pandal wala…




9 pm…sharp…Adi eyes get
struck on clock …he is ready to be called for much awaited moment….Anu here is trying
to hold back her tears, as she is can’t cry here…her eyes are constant battling
with tears ,to not come out…she is just wanted to get out of the ladies
surrounded around her…and suddenly she is given a glass of milk…she understood
time has come…as innocent Anu ,she realizes that’s what she saw happening  in that serial like {first milk ,,then share.
he drinks half and she completes the glass…then..} …she takes the glass in 
hand and says to herself “samaj gayi”…here adi tells to himself...”Arre
yaar…when this people would call me…”..Adi sneaks to bedroom checks everything
is perfect …The jasmine flowers on bed...rose on side…he sprays two shots of
room fresher…while spraying ,suddenly he finds her on door with glass of
milk…both eyes are struck…







 Finally milk with two spoons
of complan, kesar, badam and sugar is handed over…Anu is tense, Adi is
conscious in front of her while drinking milk…in rush...He drink whole milk,
then he realizes that’s’ not the way its done. He tells to himself...Which was
quite audible to her..”half dena padatha hai na..”…anu smiles slightly. She says”chalega”…Adi
hears her voice for first time…Adi is embarrassed, and things he ruin this
moment too. He goes near almari…Anu hurriedly takes glass and try to find one last
drop of milk in glass...hehehe patni dharma…but
for her surprise, not even drop was there…









 Anu takes a position in bed,
Adi get closer ….Adi ask to his mind “bath karna hai kya, ya??” Anu simply
finding this moment strange, she is with a man in a room, the one who is still
stranger … {just one knot of mangal sutra made his presence legal isn’t it}…Adi
keeps his hand over her… watching her lines like a astrologer…Anu is feeling nervousness…strange
things getting her mind like images of her parents… hold back tears comes
out…she cant control her tears and starts crying loudly. Adi is surprised he
don’t know, how to console her…as he is never consoled anybody before, he
usually console himself…Anu is not in mood stopping. She was crying loudly...it
can be heard outside their room...There is knock on the door…Adi thinks best
thing is to ask her Amma to calm her down…he opens door ..His mother rushes to
crying Anu…asks Adi...”tune kya kiya,”…Adi in question mark “kuch nahin “…Adi’s
mother ask him to sleep in her room...he is surprised that’s not that way it is
… mother consoles her and make her sleep …here adi looking from window and
rewinds whole scene… checks what mistake he would have did…he realizes it would
be milk.







 Next day, Anu is quite happy
as …she realizes she has got a mother in mother-in -law...Its quite strange as
that’s not the way ,she seen her disturbing serials on TV. She tells to her
mind …hope this surprises are reality... Anu had a feeling that she has left
her down as wife, and what Adi would have thought about this…she calls her
friend Riya…to have consult her in this issue.. Riya tells to throw her village
girl attitude and be cool like city girl or he would not be happy… Riya tells
her few rules 1] Anu not restrict any move from Adi, 2] don’t be shy and help
him whatever he does…As we know, unlikely situation their relation have Adi
like more village girl attitude….Adi here was listening the heated debate...quite
controversial which men like to talk more…infidelity of wife’s…we all have at
least one friend who talks without thinking about situation and just
blabber…Sudhir is one of them. Adi was quite listener to Sudhir, at last Sudhir
goes on challenging his friend that every women have past. Sudhir not even
think that his dear friend is just married...Adi leave the place…he tells to
his mind I think I am lucky. She is so simple village girl.







 Sun is went for break of 12
hours, shifting his duty to moon…Adi and Anu could not even talk to each other
just some passing smiles and eye contact in between whole battalion of relatives.
Both are waiting for clock ticking at 10 pm…Anu is handed over with glass
again, this time she have bit smile in her face. she tells to herself this time
I would not disappoint him…here Adi is preparing himself to be cool…and telling
himself he have to drink half of glass not full…he again fires two shots of
room fresher in room…Adi thinks it would be quite difficult that something
would happen today as she so shy….Anu is in room now with glass, this time Adi
ask Anu to drink first…Adi have heard somewhere “ladies first”… Anu just stops
at half, gives back to Adi …he completes the milk. But find sugar less…its o.k…he
says to his himself…





 Adi takes Anu’s hand in his hand,
looks at her… Anu is shy…she is still not very comfortable…but Riya’s advice
comes in her mind…she try not be shy and be perfect wife for him. First kiss of
her life… Whole body of her electrify …She still try not to react…Anu is working
now on Riya’s advice…Adi is surprised he expected some “no” ….some shyness from
Anu…kiss goes on...Anu try to be cool…that’s what she feels like city girl…innocent
isn’t it…inside she want to resist as any ordinary girl and she want to talk to
Adi for long time till sunrises… know him and want to becomes easy with him.
But it is too sudden for her…Adi could not stop his kisses…in excitement he
grabs her pallu of saree…he things she would stop him  and should he do it so soon…but…Adi is
surprised now…Anu takes her pallu off herself….she was following rule number 2
of Riya …Adi takes of his hand from her. He says to himself why she behaving
like this…she is not even resisting…Adi feels it’s not the way it should be
…and why is behaving like such experienced in this…he thinks was Sudhir
right…he gets up sit on corner of bed….Adi in anger and feeling like betrayed,
all question mark in his mind ask Anu rudely “why u behaving like this?”…Anu
here is in no clue...What I have done now…she ask to herself…Adi not even wait
her to react and leave room. Clueless Anu have her eyes moist, tears slowly
falling….whole night she could not understand her mistake…all she was trying to
be best wife…she says to herself...”Come to reality, here everything comes by
surprise”…not like her TV serials…she can’t stop crying in those unknown walls,
who still looking her as stranger…and here adi think is all that over…or there
is some more surprises which is waiting to ruin his life….







 I hope they meet and live
together…but as unlikely situation they both have…would they come again...And…
solve their misunderstanding. Will they have happy ending…I am not that
optimistic, are u optimistic about them? Next part final one….PLZ GIVE UR
VLAUBALE COMMENT... AND WOULD U LIKE TO GUESS WHATS IN THIRD PART…LET ME KNOW UR FRANK OPNINION…





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